Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
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Ka pai Reggie on a great email, this covers everything that is important about Anzac Day. I like how you have written in the subject at the top of the email.
ReplyDeleteWell done on using capital letters for peoples names and using full stops. I think this is one of the best pieces of writing you have ever done.
Do you know anyone who is a solider?