One night i was thinking about planes. I fall to sleep i had a dream about planes to. I got up and said to myself i want to fly a plane. I went to the airport and got a job there. I flied the plane for the first time there were a lot of buttons i clicked one it was a big red one it sead danger the plane turned off i was scared we crashed into a car it was a big explosion over 100 people died it was a very sad day i jump out of the plane when it was going down i put on a parachute i got down to the ground i was alive but then the plane hit the car and there was a big explosion the car went flying it hit me on the head i got brain damage the car hit a house then there was a big fire then the house fire went to other houses it was going for ageis then it stoped houses we black and walles we down. I got out of the hospital then i went home a little bit later police nocked on my door i sead hello thay seed police open up i locked my door then they brock down my door i was sckerd thay put me in a cell i sead what did i do thay sead you killed over 100 people you clicked the butten that your boss sead not to you jamp out of the plane you dident help them out you will be in her for life mwa ha ha. I sead what are you saying my boss just put me in a plane and seed have fun bye i sead to my boss do i have ralles he sead nope i sead i need some he sead no you dont go have fun i seed i qwit he sead too bad there he made the plane go then he jamp out. I sead oh no then i thort that the red butten landid the plane but no it stoped the plane it fall down and boom i jamp out i was sckerd. The police sead mk you will be in the cell for 20 years i sead mk oh man. The end.
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Monday, 20 April 2020
plane went bad
One night i was thinking about planes. I fall to sleep i had a dream about planes to. I got up and said to myself i want to fly a plane. I went to the airport and got a job there. I flied the plane for the first time there were a lot of buttons i clicked one it was a big red one it sead danger the plane turned off i was scared we crashed into a car it was a big explosion over 100 people died it was a very sad day i jump out of the plane when it was going down i put on a parachute i got down to the ground i was alive but then the plane hit the car and there was a big explosion the car went flying it hit me on the head i got brain damage the car hit a house then there was a big fire then the house fire went to other houses it was going for ageis then it stoped houses we black and walles we down. I got out of the hospital then i went home a little bit later police nocked on my door i sead hello thay seed police open up i locked my door then they brock down my door i was sckerd thay put me in a cell i sead what did i do thay sead you killed over 100 people you clicked the butten that your boss sead not to you jamp out of the plane you dident help them out you will be in her for life mwa ha ha. I sead what are you saying my boss just put me in a plane and seed have fun bye i sead to my boss do i have ralles he sead nope i sead i need some he sead no you dont go have fun i seed i qwit he sead too bad there he made the plane go then he jamp out. I sead oh no then i thort that the red butten landid the plane but no it stoped the plane it fall down and boom i jamp out i was sckerd. The police sead mk you will be in the cell for 20 years i sead mk oh man. The end.
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What an interesting story Reg! I love the title you gave it, it definitely caught my attention. I wonder how he felt when he jumped out of the aeroplane and used the parachute. I am scared of hights so I don't think I would handle it well.
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Reggie that was really good story. I don't like heights either i would of been so scared great work
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