Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 6 May 2020
dog land 1
One day there was a dog named Bob. I know you're thinking what a bad name but it’s not just Bob it’s King Bob. He’s from a place called dog land this may sound scooby doo but it's true. If you’re a bad dog you get taken to the dog box if you don’t know what the dog box is. It's a gray box that you can’t see out of but the other dog’s can see in. it’s dark. It smells like a wet dog. It's not nice at all. People can't get there because it's dog land. You get there thro sewers. If the guards see people they will eat the people then they take them out of the sewers and put them in a holl. The end.
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