Friday, 12 June 2020

Wonder people

Wonder people help other people by getting a calls saying that something is wrong. they get told the lokochon they go there in a car. but one day the car didn't start so they didn't get there very fast. they even said they would be there asap but no the car didn't start. so they called a guy who can help with the car. The guy got there and tried to fix the car. they found out why the car didn't start. its because the engine had been smashed up. They looked at the cameras and had seen that the pack had been there and smashed up the engine. They don't know why the pack hate them so much. They went for a walk and found the pack in a bunker. The pack had said why do you guys allways have to be here wean we try to have fun. We dont try to but why did you brake our car huh. They said we did it so you didnt try to get us. What makes you thingk we what do get you. We dont know you do it all the time so you wald do it agan. No just dont do eny thingk bad and you are good to go. Ok thanks NOW GET OUT!!! Omg fine dont be so mad bye. They got back home and fixd there car and went to the locachon but… the man in trabl died.
Oops next time :L the end.

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  1. Anonymous24 June 2020 at 10:42

    Hello Reggie. I really like the humour you used in the story, I think the story is very exciting and energetic.Maybe next time you could check your spelling. How did the man who was in trouble die?-Alfred

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