
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 15 April 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Ki ora regaman , I like the way you put in into like chapters 1,2 and 3 .
ReplyDeleteDid you think about maybe putting it into the sun or closer and maybe even typing it into your computer so we can read it better?
What made you think about writing a story about susanne ?
How do you have such good handwriting.