Wednesday, 13 May 2020

the war land

One day the jint went to the rat land and freed the baby then all the animals came to the rat land and made a big war. They were all winning THAN a man came they all stopped and looked.



IT'S A MAN they all said then they got very mad they ran at him but then the man grabbed out a big gun they all stopped then they ran away the man ran after them .Read namber 7 to see what happens.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 May 2020 at 17:42

    Hello Reggie,
    Great story.
    Just to let you know your work is hanging off the page.
    Keep up the great work.
    From Jennah

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  2. Unknown14 May 2020 at 11:12

    Hi Reggie good story you might need to change the settings so it does hang over the page. good stuff

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